This is a menu for a Hawaiian barbecue restaurant in pasadena called L and L Hawaiian barbecue. On the menu is a photograph of a woman sipping a drink and behind her in the distance is the ocean and tall buildings. The buildings in the background don't convince the viewer that that particular area is in Hawaii as the rest of the photograph ( the ocean and woman ) would have you to believe. What should be behind the woman is the beach along with palm trees.
Ryan Betts
Sunday, November 29, 2015
Cardiel
This is a skateboard design by Antihero skateboards for one of their riders John Cardiel. The board features a man hiding half of his face with a red handkerchief. But the word Cardiel is spelled out in the shape of the handkerchief. The white space around the man allows the viewer to better see the man while the green space around that brings out the red text. That particular shade of green could be darker to bring the red out more.
Sunday, November 22, 2015
Squirrel Cage Bulb
Kindness of Strangers
Sunday, November 15, 2015
Water bottle
This is water from a Korean market. The light blue color of the bottle and label work well. The white bubbles on the label are appropriate. Adding more depth to the bubbles would improve the design.
Fall Season
This is a Starbucks seasonal cup bringing in the fall. The yellows orange and red are appropriate and the sparse use of color accents the pinecones and leaf design on the cup. Thereisn't anything that I would change.
Sunday, November 8, 2015
Banc of California
This is a billboard in Santa Monica advertising for Banc of California. This billboard is confusing. Bank is spelled Banc rather than bank. There are two framed portraits of men on opposite sides of the billboard in suits which leads a person to think that these men are high ranking executives. It's because of the framed portraits the figures below seem out of place. A bit down under the Banc of California text in small font is the text "proud partner of Tender Greens." That's when you notice next to each headless figure in even smaller font is there name and title where you find out that one of them works for the bank and the other works for tender greens. In the few seconds a person looks at a billboard this information needs to be clearer and can be by enlarging the print near the bottom of the billboard and not framing the portraits. Also by having just the banker wearing the suit.


